[snippet] Interruptions (tGE AU, Louis and Eric)

[valmora]

Title: Interruptions
Rating: PG-13
Fandom: tGE AU. The high school one.
Pairing: Louis Sedgwick/Eric Ashley-Pitt
Disclaimer: All to MGM/UA except the crazy modifications that figletofvenice and I made.
Notes: This is the aftermath of a scene involving RJ and Roger that figletofvenice and I RP'd over AIM in early August. The gist of the scene was that Roger and Sandy, to distract RJ from his misery at having to tutor an idiot in German, started a fake fight at lunch with Nimmo and Hayes, then got caught by "Hall Nazi" Strachwitz and sent to the office. Sedgwick was there to help start it, but got distracted by Eric trying to stop him and didn't get in trouble.
I decided all on my onesies that Hayes' full name is Joseph Coleman Hayes III because I like the sound of it, but everyone calls him "Hayes" because he smacks people who call him "Joe" and pulls Sandies on people who call him "Junior" ('pulling a Sandy' being beating them up and then kicking them while they're down).





Strachwitz was going to keep all of the 'instigators' in in detention until nearly five o'clock, and since Louis was Dai's ride home from school, Louis'd decided to stay and wait, since he didn't have anywhere to be anyway.

Eric had stayed because, well...

Louis has no clue why Eric stayed, actually, but he's getting an idea.

And maybe sitting together in the math hall and doing homework like good boys until all the teachers had left at four o'clock and then engaging in something that would have been called PDA if there had actually been anyone else there isn't necessarily the most constructive way to use time, but it's certainly one of the most fun.

So here's Louis sitting on the tile floor with his back up against a locker and the metal creaking every time he moves and Eric straddling his thighs and yes, the rumors about Eric being a good kisser are true, every one of them.

And then his head slams back into the metal of the locker, so of course Eric stops even though Louis tells him that it's okay, and now he's just grumpy and frustrated and he really hopes Hayes is up for a fight because, really, Louis wants to give him one.

But not on school grounds. The last thing he needs is a detention for tomorrow when he so cleverly escaped today's.

Comments

[figletofvenice.livejournal.com]

Yeah, first impression? Mmmmm, hotness.

Exibitionism, huh? Little Ashley-Pitt surpises me more and more every day! ::laughs::

I like how the rhythm of the sentences shows how Louis is feeling (hurried and horny, most likely). You pulled it off well. I just overall liked the flow of words in this piece.

So here's Louis with his back up against a locker and the metal creaking every time he moves and Eric straddling his thighs
This image while quite hot, confuses me a little. How can Eric straddle his thighs without falling over? They are vertical, right?

Also, who is Dai? I mean, whose nickname is that? I think I'm just being stupid, but I still want to know.

Yay! I like it! I should try to force you to write smut one of these days. Hee.

[valmora.livejournal.com]

Mmmmm, hotness.
Oh, dear. ::maidenly blush:: I feel as though I should be defending Louis's nonexistent honor.

Little Ashley-Pitt surpises me more and more every day
He's just our little Bag O'Kinkiness. XD

rhythm of the sentences shows how Louis is feeling (hurried and horny, most likely)
Thanks. ^_^ That was what I was going for. (I think Eric did it just to watch him squirm.)

They are vertical, right?
Actually, no. XD When I do my homework after school, I sit on the floor with my back against my locker, so I just kind of defaulted to that. Will edit momentarily to clarify that.

This image while quite hot
You do realize I couldn't read the sentence following that without blushing, right? ^_^;;;

who is Dai
Nimmo. Dai is Nimmo's first name.

Yay! I like it!
Thank you. ^_^ I'm glad.

try to force you to write smut one of these days. Hee.
I can't type the word "thigh" without blushing, you know. ^_^;;; I can tell people without even flinching/cracking a smile that the literal meaning of "bugger" is "anal sex" (in so many words, actually) but I can't type "thigh" in a remotely sexy sense without doing the face-flushes-cherry-red thing.
Me writing smut? Err.... ::giggle::
::snicker::
::Eric and Louis look horrified::

[figletofvenice.livejournal.com]

He's just our little Bag O'Kinkiness.
I have this feeling he's just going to get worse and worse. Maybe he'll end up as a dominatrix or something. ::laughs::

Awww! You're so bashful about the smut! You should so do it. (Actually, I've only written smut a few times, and it took me forever to do it 'cause I was so embarrassed.) I'll lend you moral support! ::puts on the pressure:: Hee.

[valmora.livejournal.com]

have this feeling he's just going to get worse and worse
I think it's Louis. Louis is just unlocking all those secret little inner fetishes of his. We need to make some weird kinks of Louis's.

You should so do it.
I tried! ::whimper:: And then - then - ::sigh::

it took me forever to do it 'cause I was so embarrassed
Oh, good. I don't feel so bad now. (and it's not like we're not in good company! Neil Gaiman took forever to write one [now-published] piece because every time he tried to add anything he would just blush madly and be embarrassed.)

::puts on the pressure::
::squeaks and tries to think of something plausible::

[lew57.livejournal.com]

Ohh, this is so good!

I really love this pairing, maybe 'couse it's the only one I've come across involving Louis, although I don't understand it.