[Bleach] He Walks (?/Gin)

[valmora]

Title: He Walks
Rating: PG
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: ?/Gin, but if you know my writing predilections, it's pretty obvious.
Words: 124
Disclaimer: KT's, not mine.
Notes: Concrit appreciated. I dashed this off in ~5 min.



He walks from the room and Gin's mouth tastes of his skin, of the sound of his heart beating against Gin's throat, of the low pulse of blood in veins red as Gin's own eyes.

He walks from the room and Gin lies watching him because there is little else he can do to keep him there, because he has no right to ask him to stay, because he could not trust himself to speak if it were his right.

He walks from the room and Gin covers his mouth; although he is smiling it is broken, although his eyes are closed he is seeing; although his voice is silent he is screaming.

He walks from the room and Gin wishes he would return.

Comments

[yuusei-enigma.livejournal.com]

My poor Ichimaru ;-; *squishes him*

You captured everything so, so well - I seriously just want to grab Aizen and be all BE REALLY NICE FOR ONCE YOU JERK.

[valmora.livejournal.com]

*squishes Ichimaru too*

Aizen would probably cut your arms off if you tried it. Except when he's tickling babies, although that might not stop him either. ^_^;;;

[yuusei-enigma.livejournal.com]

He'd hand the baby off to Gin and tell him to kill it while he killed me >.>;;

[valmora.livejournal.com]

Aizen only kills the babies that annoy him. ^_^;; But he might tell Gin to give it to Grimmjaw (with of course the caveat that eating one's siblings is somewhat rude).

[yuusei-enigma.livejournal.com]

*snorts* Nah. He'd tell Gin to give it to Il Forte. Maybe he's motherly.

[valmora.livejournal.com]

Yeah, but after a certain point, Il Forte is dead. >.< What do they do then?

[yuusei-enigma.livejournal.com]

Eh. Just give him to Grimmjaw and hope he doesn't get hungry XD

[nagi-xiii.livejournal.com]

ooh. this is a good illustration of a short...but dynamic (is that the word???) scene